יום שבת, 19 במאי 2012

a letter from george to mr. cattanzara


2. Write a letter from George to Mr. Cattanzara ten years after the story ends.





One of the days last week I visited my father in my hometown, because he was sickI walked on the sidewalk in front of my house and I remembered those hot, humid nights when I wandered around the cityI also remembered you gave me money to buy lemonade when I was a little boyToday I run a company that travels around the world to give children and teen-agers educationand tools for a better lifeI called the company C-company (after your name, Cattanzara)I haven't heard anything about you nowadays, are you still working as a change maker? I wanted to say thank you. You deserve appreciation for giving me the most important lesson in my life that made me get to where I am today. I have not seen you since that day I was in the library. I own one today. A library, I mean, for charity. So, after all the things I wrote you I guess the question that still remains unanswered is if I read all these  hundred booksThe letter is attached to a flying ticket for you and your wife to California. A driver will pick you up from the airport to my house, where we will complete all the unanswered questions.
With great appreciation,
George

With great appreciationgeorge stoyonovitch



4 תגובות:

  1. It is excellent, Odem, so moving and authentic. You ahe done a great job and you surely deserve a 100!

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  2. תגובה זו הוסרה על ידי המחבר.

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  3. Odem, I just loved it! We actually read this story last year, and when I chose to feedback it I had some doubts- may I wouldn't remember anything.. But your work concluded some very important details from the story that reminded me of all of it. I got really impressed by your great imagination and creativity, but I must say that because I know you, I'm not surprised ;-]. You took George's life some meaningful steps forward and showed that everything was worth it. I loved the idea of the tickets!
    Good job!!

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  4. Excellent feedback, Omer! I almost envied Odem for all the compliments...:) You enlightened the best points at Odem's work and that's very impressive.
    Well done!
    Nurit

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