2. Write a letter from George to Mr. Cattanzara ten years after the story ends.
One
of the days last week I
visited my father in
my hometown, because he was sick. I
walked on the sidewalk in
front of my house and I
remembered those hot,
humid nights when I
wandered around the city. I
also remembered you gave me
money to buy lemonade when
I was a little boy. Today I
run a company that
travels around the world to
give children and teen-agers education, and
tools for a better life. I
called the company C-company (after
your name, Cattanzara). I
haven't heard anything about you nowadays, are you
still working as a change maker? I
wanted to say thank you. You
deserve appreciation for giving me the most
important lesson in my life that
made me get to where I am today. I
have not seen you since
that day I was in
the library. I own one
today. A library, I mean, for charity. So, after
all the things I wrote you I guess the
question that still remains
unanswered is if I read all these
hundred books. The
letter is attached to a flying ticket
for you and your wife to
California. A driver will pick
you up from the airport to
my house, where we will complete all
the unanswered questions.
With
great appreciation,
George
With great appreciationgeorge stoyonovitch
It is excellent, Odem, so moving and authentic. You ahe done a great job and you surely deserve a 100!
השבמחקתגובה זו הוסרה על ידי המחבר.
השבמחקOdem, I just loved it! We actually read this story last year, and when I chose to feedback it I had some doubts- may I wouldn't remember anything.. But your work concluded some very important details from the story that reminded me of all of it. I got really impressed by your great imagination and creativity, but I must say that because I know you, I'm not surprised ;-]. You took George's life some meaningful steps forward and showed that everything was worth it. I loved the idea of the tickets!
השבמחקGood job!!
Excellent feedback, Omer! I almost envied Odem for all the compliments...:) You enlightened the best points at Odem's work and that's very impressive.
השבמחקWell done!
Nurit